本文摘要：A Bad Cold I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!

A Bad Cold　　I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!　　I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.　　【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是根据时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全历程。写出了小作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。　　时态：这篇文章可以接纳一般现在时来写。

如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表现“患某种疾病“的用法have+表现的疾病的单词。　　注意：在表现疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。

不要只用一个单词，以制止枯燥。要写出得病后的简朴治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：My nose is hurt。

因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore;工具放在床上要用on the bed。生病，是卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。表现吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。词汇量要控制在40~60之间。

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